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MONICA 20/03/2011     Bar chart This bar chart illustrates the proportion of children who preferred watching TV in a typical day from 1998 to 2008. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the percentage decreased gradually, followed with a sharp ly upward trend. From 1998 to 2004 the proportion went down steadily from 80% to 55%, followed by a constant remaining during the next two years. Young viewers of TV programs increased significantly, up to 78% which was similar to the 1998 peak. These trends could be the result of a number of reasons. The possible reason for the decline in children watching TV between 1998 and 2004 was the widespread use of personal computers which provided more entertainment to children. Furthermore, the reduction was largely related to the usage of internet to watch films, news and programs. The percentage remain ed at the same level from 2004 to 2006 was probably due to the improvement of TV quality. The huge growth of children who watched TV was attributed to the introduction of digital TV in 2008. In conclusion, it can be seen from the trends over 10 years that the percentage of children who liked watching TV in one typical day is directly related to developments of computers, the internet and TV. //  Monica, you need to use present perfect and modal verbs when giving reasons. Otherwise, this is very good! //