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This Bar Chart the percentage of children who watched TV from 1998 to 2008. The overall trend of this graph shows a gradual decrease followed by a stable period before increasing sharply in the last years. From 1998 to 2004, the trend gradually from 80% to 55%. From 2004 to 2006, children who watched TV remained constant 55%. After the percentage of children who watched TV increased dramatically back to 80% in 2 years. There are many reasons trend. At first, 1998 to 2003, children began to than before. In this period, people started buying personal and the Internet became more and more popular so that children spent more 2004 2007, digital TV may reason for remaining there are more channels to children. At the same time, parents had more of children watching TV, as a result, the percentage had changed in this period. At last, after 2007, programs for children more interesting than before so that children might more time TV. same time, TV industry developed quickly while televisions got recording parents could record programs for their children.

To sum up, technology, parents or pressure from school children's. TV became less seems a so that children watching TV may again in the future. // Larry, your essay writing skills are getting much stronger. While your control of language in the Reasons paragraph is good, the reasons themselves are weak. Try to find 3 excellent reasons for the graph fluctuations. //