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Cyndi The bar chart indicates the percentage of children who watch TV in daily from 1998 to 2008. Overall, the trend went into a trough and then rocketed dramatically. The percentage of children who watch TV peaked at 80%, and then declined gradually every year. In 2004, the percentage accounts for the lowest proportion ( 50%) of children who watch TV and remained two years. After that, the useage of TV among under ages rocketed dramaticall in 2008.

The main factor influencing the trough could be the widespread of personal computers. More specifically, the bottom of the percentage may have been due to improved livings. With the standards of living is improving and the popularization of computers, more and more families had computers from 2000. In contrast, the rise of children who watch TV could have been attributed to the improvement of TV quality. For example, the period of LCD and HDTV coming could have been good for children's eyes. Finally, the growth in number of children to watch TV might have been resulted from more interesting programs than ten years ago.

In conclusion, it is clear that the trend reflects the fluctuation of children who watch TV in a decade.

// Cyndi, if you apply modal perfect, this essay will be very good. You need to get into the habit of checking you punctuation and spelling on a word document before pasting it onto the wiki! //