E6K+discursive+essay+SUN

=  Is this discursive essay? = = =

== In the modern age, society is progressing drastically in numerous realms. Meanwhile, renewable energy has engendered great concern. I think (informal lang.) that we should give priority to the development of renewable resources. In this essay, I would like to argue that the advantages of fostering renewable energy development. ==

= To begin with, renewable resources are suitable for the development of the economy of development countries. In rural and remote areas, transmission and distribution of energy generated from fossil fuels can be difficult and expensive. Producing them locally can offer a viable alternative. Plenty of renewable energy projects in developing countries have demonstrated that they can directly contribute to poverty alleviation by providing these sources needed business, employment and even people’s daily lives. (less signal lang.) = = =

== Furthermore, renewable energy can effectively curb global warming. Nowadays, global temperatures are rising and the climate is changing. The main reason is that the buring of fossil fuels releases carbon dioxide into the atmosphere and famous a think blanket of CO2 that covers the earth, making it warmer. In order to resolve the serious problem, fossil fuels need to be replaced by new energy sources, such as solar, biomass, or geothermal power, that do not release CO2 or other polluting chemicals which are threats to ourselves and future generation. (this sentence may be too long) ==

== In conclusion, it is clear that renewable energy can (Is "could" better? ) bring us a great number of benefits, which not only foster the development of national economy but also cope with many world problems like world petroleum crisis and global warming. Also, I firmly believe that it would be advisable for governments to allocate much more money in this field to creat our better lives. (for renewable energy.) ==